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Post by arya c. wallece on Jul 8, 2011 4:09:04 GMT -5
dear blakey wakey, it's really really late at night and my mum would have been not very happy that i'm up this late but i can't go back to sleep and i woke the school owl up and i feel really really bad because it started pecking at me a little but i had a really really bad dream and i don't know what to do but i wish you were here so that you could make me feel better because you always do but you're not here and we're not together and i don't know what i should do and i miss you a ton and a ton.love forever, arya ps: what is it called when you have a really really long sentence with no dots or swishes?
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blake t. sykes
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Post by blake t. sykes on Jul 8, 2011 5:01:34 GMT -5
dear little sis,
awh love, are you okay? do you need me to come over there and tell you a story? it'd be no problem, you know that. what was the bad dream about? i hope it wasn't about the bubbles squishing you to death again. that one was a scary one. don't worry, you mom won't know about this. your secrets safe with me. i miss you too. i hate that you're all alone and scared too. it hurts me.
[/size] love blakey wakey
ps. it's called a run-on sentence. and yes, you just did exactly that.
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Post by arya c. wallece on Jul 8, 2011 12:05:49 GMT -5
dear blakey wakey, aww, it wasn't the bubble one this time! it was one with a lot of scary trees and big branches and they were making a lot of scary faces and it was really really dark! it's okaaaay, i'll try and get through it- mummy says i should really be getting through this by myself. i miss you so so so so so much! what are you doing right now? maybe you can tell me a story by owl! (:love forever, arya ps: is it when you use a lotta ands and buts and becauses?
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Post by blake t. sykes on Jul 9, 2011 23:02:22 GMT -5
dear little sis,
remind me to tell your mom that you aren't allowed to watch the wizard of oz. i'm afraid i'd give you the nightmare again. though have you even watched any muggle movies lately? your moms a smart lady, i just always have troubles knowing you're scared and i'm not there. i don't like it! i never will. you growing up on me is as scary as all your dreams. combined. what kind of story would you like? i'm just lying here in bed so i'm up for giving you on. my owl could use the excersize too, eh ria?
[/size] love blakey wakey
using many ands and buts would be called a run-together sentence. they're both independant and shouldn't be used together. instead, the sentence should be broken up by a comma without using those connecting words. THAT IS, unless it isn't actually an end of a setence that you're trying to continue, making a run-on sentence. it's all complicated.
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Post by arya c. wallece on Jul 10, 2011 18:45:53 GMT -5
dear blakey wakey, okee dokee! i saw... whassit called! i saw the super super old movie, lovely bones! it was really really scary! awww! i'll never grow up! i'll be like peter pan! yes! i'll go to neverland! oooh! yes yes yes! how about... that... make one up! make one up! love forever, arya ps: ohhh... i still don't get it
pss: one of my friends say you're super mean and i told her that's not real because you would never be mean to anyone!
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Post by blake t. sykes on Jul 11, 2011 0:03:32 GMT -5
dear little sis,
lovely bones! whattt? who told you to watch that? arie, that's a scary movie for a little girl like you. some muggle movies are like that. did you check with mum before you watched it? or did your friends tell you it wasn't going to be scary again? also, i'd be quite okay if you never aged. that way you'd always be safe and young. happy and free!
i do have a story for you, BUT you have to promise me one thing. okay? after it's over, you go back to sleep. you know you need your beauty sleep! just like sleeping beauty.
[/size] love blakey wakey
ps: that's okay, i'll teach you more next time we're together and you're in a learning mood, okay?
pps: what did that little.... girl tell you i did that makes me mean?
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Post by arya c. wallece on Jul 11, 2011 10:11:38 GMT -5
dear blakey wakey, uh, my mummy doesn't know. she thought we were watching a nice movie. and how did you know? are you a seer? (: my friends dd tell me it wasn't going to be scary! but i think i was the only one who ran out of the room... oooh! yes yes yes! do tell me! pleeeease! i promise i promise! i'll be good! i promise!love forever, arya ps: alrighty! but i don't like school too!
pss: oh no, she wasn't little! she was older! she was like.... twenty or so! she was oooold! but she said you were mean to people! that you said mean things! but i told her never to say something like that again! because that wasn't nice!
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blake t. sykes
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Post by blake t. sykes on Jul 12, 2011 1:00:43 GMT -5
dear little sis,
i won't tell mum THIS time, but you have to stop doing that or you'll scare the pants off of yourself! and we both know you keep your pants on unless you're in private AND by yourself.
i'm not the best story telling ever, you promised though so here it goes. feel free to add things in okay arie?
once up a time, there was a little girl with brillant red hair. she lived in a place where the waterfalls and the birds were the melody of the town..
[/size] love blakey wakey
ps: that's why we won't think of it as school! we can call it whatever you want. how about you make a name for it?
pps: are we calling me old again? i'm twenty, remember? i'd tickle you for that if i was over there! thank you very much for sticking up for me too. that was so noble of you. no wonder you're a gryffindor. you have to remember, though, i am a slytherin. i'm not made only of cotton candy arya.
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Post by arya c. wallece on Jul 12, 2011 15:21:34 GMT -5
dear blakey wakey, righty! i'm tweeeelve not twooo- of course i know that! but i did see a boy go to the bathroom and he didn't close the door. i had to close my eyes. occ: LMFAO. i swear, i burst out laughing there. ooooohh! hmm... and she had a unicorn! yes! a unicorn!love forever, arya ps: yes yes yes! i shall call it. azkaban!
pss: nu uuuuuh! you're not old! you're not twenty! and that's not true too! s is for super nice! all of the slytherins are super nice! for gryffindor, g is great!
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Post by blake t. sykes on Jul 13, 2011 2:12:57 GMT -5
dear little sis,
i know, i know. you're twelve. but you're growing up too fast! we go over this all the time. it worries me! boys will be boys it seems.. why were you around a boy while he peed? did he go in the girls bathroom, or outside like a homeless man? either way, there's something wrong with that. good job for closing your eyes. you've always been a bright girl.
the girl's name was thirteen. her birthday was today, and her presents were spread all across the land. to get to her presents, she had to go on a great adventure..
ooc: he sounds like a paranoid, overprotective old granny.. LMAO
[/size] love blakey wakey
ps: you want to name MY school after a prison? with dementors? i'd sure hope it's not that bad! how about something a little more.. happy instead of soul sucking?
pps: super nice? what's hufflepuff then? hairy? and how about ravenclaw? ravishing and rambunctious? or maybe rabbit-like. that sounds better, i think.
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Post by arya c. wallece on Jul 13, 2011 12:38:20 GMT -5
dear blakey wakey, it was a regular bathroom for both girls and boys and he didn't close the door! it was ewww! and of course i'm bright! daddy says i'm a star! ooooh! her birthday? when's her birthday! what happened next? tellmetellmetellme! they're soooo adorableee!love forever, arya ps: how about... ooh! ooh! how about the 'the rainbow golden pot of happy-ness and fun-ness!'
pss: hmmm... ravenclaw is right! washaa! and hufflepuff is happy! YAAAAYYYYY!
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Post by blake t. sykes on Jul 16, 2011 3:25:41 GMT -5
dear little sis,
a bright star is right. her birthday happens to be on the same day as yours, arie. can you believe that? i thought it was pretty cool.
hints were left around for her to go on each step of the adventure, making sure she could get to all of her presents. the first hint lead her to an ice cream shop. not an ordinary ice cream shop, though. this shop was her favorite, and for her first present she recieved her favorite ice cream, free, in a large cone!
[/size] love blakey wakey
ps: much, much better.
pps: so i'm right about ravenclaw? they're rabbit-like? i wonder if they're aware of that! not too sure it's a flattering feature to have. just saying!
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Post by arya c. wallece on Jul 18, 2011 1:54:30 GMT -5
dear blakey wakey, ooooh whoaaaaa! the same birthdaaaay? wicked! she got strawberry ice cream! wow! i wish i were this girl! that would be so much fun! we would go on a merry go round and everything! ohboy! we'd have so much fun!love forever, arya pss: nooo silly! ravenclaws are always right! they're always giving the right answer!
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Post by blake t. sykes on Jul 18, 2011 19:31:03 GMT -5
dear little sis,
yes! the same birthday. great, right? i thought so. this is going to be a true story too.
the next clue lead her to the amusement park that her mum took her to at least once a year. there was always one ride she would never go on, though. which ride was that? well, it was the ferris wheel. she was scared of the height but the clue said to get her next, she must lift up, up, up into the air. thirteen knew that it meant she had to face her fear.
[/size] love blakey wakey
pps: well, i was enjoying rabbit-like! i even went and told some ravenclaw walking around the corridors.. whoops.
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Post by arya c. wallece on Jul 18, 2011 22:14:11 GMT -5
dear blakey wakey, nooooo! not the ferris wheel! but that's so scary! why would she go on it!? doooon't go onnnn! it's sooooo scary! nooooooo!love forever, arya pss: awww! that's not really nice! what did they say?!
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